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Continue with your writing task from yesterday. You should read through your plan and spend some time today editing and improving your writing.


Think about:

  • structure and use of paragraphs
  • Use of conjunctions (FANBOYS and ISAWAWABUB)
  • Choice of vocabulary
  • Use of similes and metaphors to describe the setting.
  • Use dialogue to convey character and advance action
  • Use of synonyms
  • Use of pronouns 
  • A range of punctuation ; : , '